Stay out of the woods.
There the spring is soft
as fiddleheads reach
upward. Air ambles
in fog and pollen and
imprints left around
the roots of giant pines.
The backwoods, they’re
called; and they call
back, if you’re listening:
moans, grunts, or wails,
like something roams
between the trees and
leaves tufts of hair for us
to find and follow back,
further into the forest.
The stories go far back,
but unless you believe
in fiends, in ghosts, I
will leave the matter
alone.
Disingenuous
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9 comments:
"spring is soft
as fiddleheads"
I love that part.
Did you know you can eat fiddleheads? :) You can.
Came over from LL's tweet of your post. I, too, really like "soft as fiddleheads". I also like "'Air ambles" and the line "The stories go far back..."
The poem reminded me right away of Hanzel and Gretyl and deep dark woods.
ah, Sasquatch
i like call back
follow back
and go far back
i'm not afraid of Sasquatch; i just think we should all be on alert.
I like this:
The backwoods, they’re
called; and they call
back, if you’re listening:
And the tufts of hair.
Good one.
this takes me to a pine forest in south africa. where i lay down and just listened to all the sounds.
i was hoping for peace but instead i had this creepy feeling crawling up my back.
i think it's the groan in the bark ; )
I will have to ready that to my kids late night camping. Thanks for the Poem.
breath taking,
wow...
keep rocking.
Very interesting... I enjoyed reading this one, full of flow and imagery...
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